describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt and vice versa.
Every country, presently, has its own traditional ways of living. These customs are not only followed by their natives but also impress the people from other countries. So, it is important for both countries to improve themselves by adopting good customs from each others. I will explain my point of view in upcoming paragraphs.
As India is a diverse country, so there are multifarious customs and rituals. Living with family members is one of these. Because of this, they always mutually support each other during the thick and thin times. Apart from this, it is a tradition of India to give respect to their elders. As a consequence, they not only live with their parents and grandparents but also take their care during old age. They always think that if they take care of their parents as well as their children, then God will give them place in heavens after death. On the contrary, people of foreign countries often lack these elite qualities, and hence, they can imbibe these customs and improvise their family relationships.
On the other hand, in western countries, nowadays, people focus on equality among different strata of people. Despite being from different religions or colors, they always believe in humanity. Instead, they always legislate rules and regulations solely focused on the growth of nation rather than focusing on particular caste and color. So if we adopt these customs from foreign countries, then it is beneficial for the holistic growth of our nation, and not of a particular caste. Consequently, India can improve the quality of life for their citizens by imitating such behavior from the foreign nations.
To conclude, if foreign countrymen learn about living with parents from India and Indians learn about equality from them, then it will be beneficial for both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, then, well, apart from, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09427609428 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56047268307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9529589958 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203150229419 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686233365978 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709034734529 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141629948106 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649523038406 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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