Manned space flight is costly and dangerous.
In this argument, the author claims that the Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. He has also cited about the recent success of unmanned space probes and satellite that has helped gathering useful information without the risk of the human life risk in the space. Though the underlying reasons sound good and reasonable, because of a lack of relevant evidence, unaddressed assumptions, and vague terminology, the author's argument is unsubstantiated and deeply flawed.
First and foremost, author assumes that the manned space flight is coslty and dangerous. However, today's technology has reached to height where the specific safety measures are taken, still there will be a risk. In addition, the cost of space flight may be reducing with new technology and use of effective materials.
Secondly, the author made a hasty generalisation about the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites. The author only mentioned about the success, he has nowhere mentioned about the failures. There is possibility that there are many failures before this series of success. In addition to this fallacious assumption, he has also claim that unmanned space probes and satellite has negligible cost and risk in comparision to the manned space flight. There is certainly more chances of failure in unmanned space probes than in manned space flight, as human intervention is always better then the autonomous systems.
Moreover, author is expliciltly mentioning about men and woman separately in his argument. He may be doing partiality between men and woman. The author also commented on investing our resources in unmanned space flight. However, can future mission rely only on the recent success of unmanned space mission?
Hence, the argument lacks thorough analysis and reliable statistic. The author should have investigated the actual number of successful and unsuccessful unmanned flights. He should also mention about the total cost and compare it with manned space flight. This would have strengthened the argument.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-23 | Krisha Lakhani | 58 | view |
| 2023-08-17 | riyarmy | 83 | view |
| 2023-08-11 | Anish Sapkota | 58 | view |
| 2023-08-04 | DCAD123 | 50 | view |
| 2023-07-30 | BusariMoruf | 55 | view |
- In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their empl 83
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 48
- The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise Currently the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away thus 77
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permi 23
- The world’s forests are facing increasing pressure which, if left unchecked, will threaten the health of many industries, economies, nations, and lives. The development of an international fund to help developing countries implement useful conservation 60
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1684 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.279 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.663 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to gather' or 'gather'.
Suggestion: to gather; gather
...ce probes and satellite that has helped gathering useful information without the risk of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...assumptions, and vague terminology, the authors argument is unsubstantiated and deeply ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'claimed'.
Suggestion: claimed
...this fallacious assumption, he has also claim that unmanned space probes and satellit...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...flight, as human intervention is always better then the autonomous systems. Moreover, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cent success of unmanned space mission? Hence, the argument lacks thorough analy...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43260188088 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76755819222 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3944735238 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.70786347227 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393575132289 0.218282227539 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142236783122 0.0743258471296 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182956293285 0.0701772020484 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248050017021 0.128457276422 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882037841374 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.