The maps detail renovation of an university's sports center by comparing now and future plan of its arrangement.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are plans to extend surrounding fields of the pool in order to provide more facilities for swimming, change room, dance studio beside other recreational activities such as shopping and having coffee by integrating two outdoor courts with the main field.
At the moment, the main building is flanked by large outdoor courts, being configured simply by which a 25m pool is located in the middle of the sports center encircled by pool facilities. In the current layout, the gym is to the north of the pool as well as the seating and changing room are stood in the side of the pool respectively eastward and westward. Moreover, clients can find the reception section where is situated in front of the entrance and to the south of the pool.
Regard to future plans, the entire main building will not undergo alternates. The only slight exception is that the gym will be lengthened eastward and connected with two new adjoining dance studios. While, The most noticeable changes are that western outdoor courts will be removed in favor of a leisure pool and mutually eastern outdoor courts will be replaced by a sport's hall. According to the plans, the university will add two additional changing rooms south corners of the sports center. A new cafeteria will open abutting the east of the entrance area which is mirrored by a new sports shop in the west.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89272030651 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61078993254 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3309882333 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131697327492 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563972941988 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035079854282 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839317923442 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388590275173 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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