the table below describe victim by age group offense categories in Venezuela 1999
The table given illustrates in terms of the number of Venezuelan of five age group who became a victim of various crime, namely.... in 1999.
Overall, robbery was the most popular offense across all the age group. Moreover, Robbery ranked the highest point at 9680 total victims and was followed by kidnapping, blackmail, murder and negligence at 233, 223, 162 and 54 reported crimes, respectively.
The murder was the most common crimes reported from ages 25-44, about 72 and the least reported with 0-14 and 65+ at 14 and 13 reports, respectively. Negligence and kidnapping were highest with the 0-14 age group, at 39 and 110. Meanwhile, 65+ had the least victims at these crimes, around 9 and 3, respectively.
The robbery was the most significant category with the 15-24 and 25-44 age groups claiming 4558 transgressions. Blackmail affected 25-44 and 45-64-year-olds the most with 89 and 76 victims.
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
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- THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE AMOUNT OF MONEY PER WEEK SPENT ON FAST FOODS IN BRITAIN.THE GRAPH SHOWS THE TRENDS IN CONSUMPTION OF FAST FOODS.WRITE A REPORT FOR A UNIVERSITY LECTURER DESCRIBING THE INFORMATION SHOWN BELOW 84
- the table below describe victim by age group offense categories in Venezuela 1999 67
- THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE ACTUAL AND ESTIMATED NUMBER OF VISITORS TO A NEW ART GALLERY FROM ITS OPENING DATE IN 1990 UP TO AND INCLUDING 2001 iT ALSO INDICATES THREE EVENTS IN THE GALLERY S LIFE BELOW THE CHART THERE ARE TWO PIE CHARTS WHICH SHOW THE SATI 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous crime, namely.... in 1999. Overall, robbery was the most popular offense acr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10067114094 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89719969049 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4005917727 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204674066094 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108239517205 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783213542949 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135871105277 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674343502354 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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