There are social, medical, technical problems associated with the use of mobile phone. Do you agree that the problems the benefits of mobile phone.

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There are social, medical, technical problems associated with the use of mobile phone. Do you agree that the problems the benefits of mobile phone.

The implication of there is several problem of use mobile phone like social problems and medical problems and last technical problems. Which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subjec6t has a generated controversy ove5r the potential impact of this trend. I believe that this is right and this will be further discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the outside, there are diverse reason why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that there are many benefits of mobile phone like it help on every time every situation and this can be a contribute factor to mobile gives internet we are search any kind information about study and etc therefore the negative impact of mobile phone cannot be densest.
Nevertheless, some people adopt on opposing view and tend to believe that there are so many disadvantage of mobile phone like more use of mobile phone this is damage so this is big loser of technology and more use of mobile decrease the eye sight this is create health problems can be view addressed with some positive facts as well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that.
Overall, there is so many advantage of mobile phone like internet using etc but on the other hand some we have some disadvantage of mobile phone like health and technical.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
The implication of there is several problem of use mobile phone like social problem...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l problems and last technical problems. Which is fairly debatable has now gained furt...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ry time every situation and this can be a contribute factor to mobile gives internet we are ...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gives'' or 'gif's'?
Suggestion: gives'; gif's
...is can be a contribute factor to mobile gives internet we are search any kind informa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
...w and tend to believe that there are so many disadvantage of mobile phone like more use of mobile...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ogy and more use of mobile decrease the eye sight this is create health problems can be v...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...f mobile decrease the eye sight this is create health problems can be view addressed w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...in favor of that. Overall, there is so many advantage of mobile phone like internet using etc...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mobile phone like health and technical.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88983050847 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53709904983 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.329117746 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.857142857 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 20.9669160288 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337039719913 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158852421775 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163462417337 0.071462118173 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21450134063 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237480991385 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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