The plans show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts how the sports centre of a university will be transformed into hereafter.
By now, the swimming pool which is 25 metres in length is right in the middle of the plan, surrounded by the room for altering clothes, seats for audiences and gymnastic room while the reception was placed opposite the entrance. Two outdoor courts were built to the West and the East of the middle building.
In the future, the Gymnastic room will be extended by doubling the old one. The both outdoor courts are likely to demolish, the left one is projected to be another pool which is named as leisure pool that will have its own changing room like the previous one. A sports store will be next to the new changing room. Regarding the right one, position for a sports hall will be behind the seating, which is likely to be in front of the two Dance studios that build near to each other, precisely. Besides, another changing room will be contrasted in the right corner of the plan and the café will possibly right in the left of the former.
Apart from those changes, the 25m pool and these surrounding apartments will be tended to remain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...Regarding the right one, position for a sports hall will be behind the seating, which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60294117647 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3453871797 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4376636347 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960640730578 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518884504596 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476191140496 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737901345238 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587026694339 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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