Success in life is more often elusive than not.what factors help to make an individual successful?
Today the world has been changing dramatically day by day and people are in the midst of a rat race. Success, a formidable task ,for, many people are struggling to attain a fulfillment in life.Being a victorious personality,education is not only the prime factor but also it depends on various factors.
Some people show slackness while learning in school;however,they achieve a triumph in the later life because of their hard work and innovative ideas.If people think different from others it will open scores of job opportunities as we see in case of the founder of KFC. He started his business in a roadside restaurant and today KFC is one of the best food chains entrepreneurship in the world. Besides,learning from experience is the best quality of a successful personality. To be precise,if a person has the ability to recognise his mistakes and avoid the same in future it will result in the successfulness.
Eventhough qualification is mandatory to obtain a lucrative job in reputed multinational companies;however,talents and calibre cannot be ignored in this cut-throat competitive era. Moreover,a regular practice is a necessity. Those who have innate ability work out on a regular basis would make a remarkable change in their excellency like Sachin Tendulkar,a famous Indian cricket player.He had been playing cricket since childhood which helps him to excel in his profession.
Overall people can succed in various domains depend on their circumstances they came across.some people reach a zeneath because of their passion and dedication while others reach their goal through hard work,life experience and different thinking capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41698841699 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56480027725 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0533810031 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741213596395 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293231808747 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451892228963 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435761753829 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348329509995 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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