1. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
I would like to tell you that i am working in a well-organized company. I have not much time because my company is launching a new project coming soon. my boss give me this task to lead this project then my boss give me new designation.
So you know this is opportunity for me to lead this project. I will not continue this course yet. this course is very interesting for me and I am enjoying a lot specially with you. Your teaching style is different from others. Your are very polite, friendly and cooperative with all students even me. this course helps me in future.
I am very sad that I will not continue this course. When I will complete this company project then will continue this course. I will happy if you accept my humble request. I shall be very thankful to you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ear Sir, I would like to tell you that i am working in a well-organized company....
^
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...is launching a new project coming soon. my boss give me this task to lead this pro...
^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t. I will not continue this course yet. this course is very interesting for me and I...
^^^^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...I am enjoying a lot specially with you. Your teaching style is different from others...
^^^^
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... students even me. this course helps me in future. I am very sad that I will not conti...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d that I will not continue this course. When I will complete this company project th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43537414966 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930397104 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5551110164 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.1538461538 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3076923077 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232571185499 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946016521146 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409680082492 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159442890451 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421342728315 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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