At universities in some countries, it is common for students, especially for those who have no scholarship, to have jobs while they study. They may work in offices, at the library, in labs or as teachers’ assistants. They earn money for living expenses and sometimes receive a reduction in tuition as well.
Is this a good idea? Support your opinion with specific reasons and details.
It is true that the students prefer to work during study period remains a controversy in the education field. While this issue is fit to somebody, I totally agree that student should concentrate on academy study with noticeable exception that their family couldn’t give him essential expenditure fee.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why working in university is beneficial. Firstly, it is absolute correct that by working students will be able to earn money from his jobs, and since they will likely be mature enough. Secondly, throughout working, student who has to work may obtain a lot of experience and skill such as communication skill, schedule control which student do not touch in classroom. By working, the important factor which student obtains that they will reduce the gap between theory and reality, it had better if the part-time job are closed to the their speciality such as computer scientist student should seek a job in computer shop or press student trying to be a collaborator of newspapers.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to take into consideration before working. Firstly, the part-time job accounted for a significant free time which use for homework and self-research, consequently, student spend no time to focus on studying it lead to the score decline. Furthermore, another problem is health. When working two or more jobs, student do not have enough time to relax and enjoy, during long period the body will get sick.
From what has been discussed above I can draw the conclusion that student should not had a part-time job unless they get in financial troubles.
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- At universities in some countries, it is common for students, especially for those who have no scholarship, to have jobs while they study. They may work in offices, at the library, in labs or as teachers’ assistants. They earn money for living expenses 73
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Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0405904059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.813362153 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7304135834 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14634016855 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508070451253 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309417970212 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807286342627 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306987091422 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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