the economic growth in developing and developed countries is making people richer. However the researches indicates that people in developing countries is happier than people in developed countries. what is your opinion?
Even though by altering the economical conditions, folk in all over the world get richer, but researchers claimed that whom are in developing countries are happier than others in developed ones. Although, initially, it may seem simple, writing about this complex and controversial subject is not very convenient. Because in which multifarious criteria come together as affecting agents.
While some people might allegate that people in developed countries are more satisfied, but to me having more satisfication in developing countries does make more sense. To illustrate my perspective of the topic, I will vindicate my reasons in the following essay.
The first dimension worthy to point out is the difference between the poor condition of life and relative welfare condition, in comparison to good and better one. In first situation which is common in developing societies, the standard of people's life is most of the times below the global standards, and revise it to a better one gain a immense amount of happiness and hope. but in the other hand, when conditions are good enough, make the better one, doesn't give extra hope and happiness. Even it maybe cause sadness. because they might be overthink about everything and this, may cause depression.
Despite having money and being reach is all everyone wants, but it is an indisputable fact that money is not everything.
I approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should consider another subtle point meticulously that sometimes for earning more money human beings should work a lot and maybe the outcome of comfortability in life doesn't outweigh the effort. In this case it can be examplified that for having a better economic condition, occupations should have work harder and this means having more money but not having enough time to enjoy it.
So it can be reiterated that by concidering the coincidence of the two presented reasons before, Although the effect amplitude of the topic varies a lot, but it seems what researchers declared before is reasonable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
Even though by altering the economical conditions, folk in all over the world ...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...versial subject is not very convenient. Because in which multifarious criteria come tog...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ome people might allegate that people in developed countries are more satisfied, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n in developing countries does make more sense. To illustrate my perspective of t...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rds, and revise it to a better one gain a immense amount of happiness and hope. b...
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Suggestion: But
...a immense amount of happiness and hope. but in the other hand, when conditions are ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...s are good enough, make the better one, doesnt give extra hope and happiness. Even it ...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...extra hope and happiness. Even it maybe cause sadness. because they might be overthin...
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Suggestion: Because
...happiness. Even it maybe cause sadness. because they might be overthink about everythin...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...le fact that money is not everything. I approaching this issue, apart from the ...
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Line 8, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...subtle point meticulously that sometimes for earning more money human beings shou...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...e the outcome of comfortability in life doesnt outweigh the effort. In this case it ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19879518072 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82259613097 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58734939759 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.371314247 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221445631313 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645229786216 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120815945828 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107599864165 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114260170019 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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