It is said that University affordability for both the rich and the financially weaker section of society is difficult. The essay will explain how these different sections of society, the rich and the poor, have different issues regarding college education.
while the under-previleged finds, lots of hurdles, pursuing a college education, the rich people hardly face it.
Problems face by poor are discussed first, followed by a comparison with rich.
The financially backward section of the society, due to the lack of resources, are unable to join colleges.
Since most of them live in the remote areas, they have limited information access resulting in less awareness among the masses. Weak Financial conditions is a deterrent force in pursuit of the college. For they have to look for jobs in early age to support their family. Although Government has various welfare schemes for the needy, most of them are ignorant to this.
On the other hand, the ward of financially sound parents, have little difficult enrolling in University. Most of the time they are well aware and are supported by their parents. They have privilege to take mentoring services which helps them in admission. Furthermore, being rich they can afford to pay hefty fees, which is common in private university, and get enrolled.
These students also has no burden to work part-time, which increases their success rate of finishing the course.
It can be conclude that being financially weak can have adverse implications on getting enrolled into a university, which does not seems difficult for the rich due to their strong support base.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...nt issues regarding college education. while the under-previleged finds, lots of hur...
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Line 11, column 132, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...olled into a university, which does not seems difficult for the rich due to their str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20229007634 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77037456575 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2708597046 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132432001823 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431767289889 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572466480313 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600153828828 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589023273524 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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