Parents of your close friend are coming to your area for a visit.
He/she asked you to suggest some places for older people to visit. Write a letter to your friend and include the following:
– Suggest some places his/her parents could visit.
– Recommend a place for them to stay.
– Give some other ideas for their visit.
Hi Monica,
I have just received your letter. I am glad to assist your parents on their vacation to India. Since they were in their late 60's, they might prefer a place with peace and harmony. There are several pilgrims and traditional places in my city, that would highly suitable for your parents.
Firstly, they can visit Manasrover, where the Ganges will fall from the Himalayan mountains. It would be more mesmerizing to watch it around 6 PM in the early morning. Later, after the temple visit, there was a large township called Auroville which was built for tourist as a relaxation centre. Followed by a museum visit has a masterpiece in it. I would recommend staying in a hotel Radisson Blue which provides great services for their customer which is close to all tourist spots.
Finally, it is a rainy season and the temperature is too cold. So I recommend them to bring suitable clothes for their trip.
I hope you find this helpful. Please notify me in before their travel, so that I can get to see them.
Regards,
Valli
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-29 | Gaurav2019 | 74 | view |
| 2019-08-25 | valli | 85 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Monica, I have just received your letter. I am g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74725274725 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45015519423 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9431328201 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4615384615 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212636474405 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060598355645 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502007215459 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100313257413 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716649724649 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.