Computer and online games should be banned to students in schools as they have no educational value. What’s your opinion?
The important effect of computer and online game should be banned to students in schools as they have no educational value which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of computer and online game should be banded for students has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent year on computer and online game should be banned. It can be agreed that computer and online games makes the students more addicted in playing games rather than course study which is not good for students.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why the computer and online game should be banned for students but the most conspicuous one steam's from the fact that computer and online game waste the valuable time for study. As an illustration, for example, a current study shows in America ten students of CIT collage failed their final exam due to more playing the computer and online game in 2009. In addition, computer and online game makes the students lazy and bored in the society, they will spent their whole time in playing games where they dont have a social and family time, no friends time. Thus, game is very dangerous in every students life.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that students playing more online game have no education value, they will not learn new things, idea. For instance, students playing game in computer and online are very aggressive and they spent all the valuable time with game, by playing game they will not sleep properly, less eating, poor personal hygiene.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of students focus more time in playing games has no education value is prominent so students should avoid all games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...azy and bored in the society, they will spent their whole time in playing games where...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... whole time in playing games where they dont have a social and family time, no frien...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
.... Thus, game is very dangerous in every students life. Another key of justification f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91973244147 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35173425785 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494983277592 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8798430686 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.1 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482719137091 0.242375264174 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233678517934 0.0925447433944 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921602180468 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325785909441 0.151781067708 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808604867202 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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