Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.
Nowadays, Incomes of people in different jobs are not equal and celebrities usually have much money than others. Therefore, people want them have to pay far too much money. It seems to me that I absolutely agree with that counsel. In this essay, I will concern two reasons about that issue.
The first reason I think is most workers such as nurses and teachers have low salaries. Two types of jobs are very important in our society because they involve directly in life of each person. They have to work under pressure without holidays or vacations. Everymonth, they just earn 4-12 millions VND instead of 10 times higher of famous people. In the other hand, nurses and teachers have only one source of income but celebrities can earn money from variety of activities for instance shows, representation of brands or even their own brands.
From my point of view, the next reason is people who are well-known often waste their money on expensive houses, cars and parties. For example, in Viet Nam, celebrities have their own villas of luxurious departments in District 7 or District 2. They just use cars that are from famous brands like mercedes, audi, roll royce. Besides, parties are celebrated everynight in dear restaurants with diversity of wines and foods.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that If people are famous, they should disburse far too much money. In addition, I hope that celebrities will comprehend that matter and they are content to pay much money than others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9203187251 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52423060181 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9641085814 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172450166089 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575177906207 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450006872979 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11534967516 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403705337188 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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