TPO 40
According to the reading passage, by the scientists' researching, while there would be a chance to provide for permanent and long-lasting inhabitants in Mars or the Moon; for Venus it is almost near zero. The author claimed that there are several reasons which lead no condition to inhabit in Venus. On the other hand, the lecturer opposed the explanation stated by the passage.
First, the author argues that the high pressure of Venus witnessed by the crushing of a spacecraft, landed on Venus is the major reason to not letting human to live there. The lecturer opposed that by claiming that with landing the station 50 kilometers above Venus's land, which the pressure there is roughly near the earth's pressure, this problem will be solved.
Second, according to the passage, with the shortage of oxygen and water, the most essential elements for humans, it couldn't be a sufficient place for humans, however, the lecturer mentioned that with the abundance of other components of Venus, and the help of chemical reactions, oxygen and so on water could be produced.
The last pointed view of the passage is the lack of sunlight as a reason of thick clouds over the Venus, likewise a thick layer of carbon; which brings about to reflect the sunlight; instead of appealing it. The speaker mentioned that by placing the station above the surface, the station could get both the sunlight reflected by clouds and the one directly radiate from the sun.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lasting inhabitants in Mars or the Moon; for Venus it is almost near zero. The au...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... most essential elements for humans, it couldnt be a sufficient place for humans, howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, likewise, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92653061224 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51626611643 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0605764678 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.875 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326101770186 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124885738602 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048834688605 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178092616238 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219000833786 0.0443174109184 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.3589403974 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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