The pie chart illustrates how many females were in poverty in the United States during 2008, while the bar graph depicts the rate of poverty according to their gender and age. Overall, single women with no children under the age group of 18-24 are found to be predominant.
From the pie chart, it is clear that unmarried females with no children dependent on them accounted for almost more than half of the women in poverty, whereas the single women with the depending child comprised one fourth of the total females under poverty. The married women with children and the married females with no children accounted for 8 per cent and 12 per cent respectively.
From the table, it is evident that under all the age groups females were found to be having higher poverty rate compared to males.Male and female children under the age group of 5 are having highest poverty rate and ranked first, while the teenage girls with the age ranging from 18-24 ranked second, followed by females in the age group of 25-34 which equates to the women with the age of 75 and above 75 years old. The males were found to be highly under poverty till 24 years of age, after which there is slight variation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Male
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.663507109 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20931377615 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502369668246 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.852209038 43.030603864 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.0 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196839301162 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111138776239 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925005276899 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157409732737 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801178125495 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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