It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree?
These days, thanks to development of technologies, there is a wide variety of jobs related to handle these technologies. While in the past the number of jobs was very small and people faced with limitations to find suitable jobs. So they had to follow their parents’ career and tried to develop it. I personally disagree with this statement that children should choose certain jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs now. Following reasons and examples prove my approach.
By advent of technologies, the abilities and skills of children are higher than those of parents so they should sele...
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thanks to development of technologies
thanks to the development of technologies
related to handle these technologies
related to handling these technologies
my uncle did not like to follow his father job and be a farmer
my uncle did not like to follow his father's job and to be a farmer
that are close related to their skills
that are closely related to their skills
without attention to their interests
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they will fail in compete with others automatically.
they will fail in competing with others automatically.
they will fail to compete with others automatically.
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