Dear Leena,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. Although it's not been a long time since we met each other, it feels much longer.
Thanks for the fantastic hospitality and the beautiful photos that you sent me today on my email id. Even though a few images are missing, could you please also forward those to me? All snaps are just magnificent. It brought it back to me so vividly. Staying with you at your place and exploring new tourist places was a great experience.
Sorry, I couldn't write you back after the trip. Since I was on a long journey, I couldn't get time to complete the HR certification. Therefore, I had to go to Delhi University to finish the exam this month. Amid all these, I did forget to contact you.
Next month, we are celebrating our 2nd marriage anniversary. If you make it out time for a function, we will be a delighted person on earth. It will give you a chance to meet the rest of the family and to explore new places in Bangalore. Share your flight details within this week, I'll come to pick up at the airport. No doubt, you are going to stay with us, so need to book a hotel.
Let's catch up on 15th August and celebrate the function.
Take care.
Your Friend
Deepika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...es was a great experience. Sorry, I couldnt write you back after the trip. Since I ...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... trip. Since I was on a long journey, I couldnt get time to complete the HR certificati...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e your flight details within this week, Ill come to pick up at the airport. No doub...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ay with us, so need to book a hotel. Lets catch up on 15th August and celebrate t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42794759825 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40742480853 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663755458515 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8380906658 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7222222222 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24926828392 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652396700268 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574656227888 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113021677122 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747057150895 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.