Many people believe the government should spend money on faster public transport. Others think that money should be spent on different aspects of public transportation, such as cost reduction and environment conservation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, transportation system is an part of the society. Many people argue that authorities should consume the vast amount of money on government-funded vehicles while others believe that they spend huge chunk on different aspects like cost reduction and protect the environment. This essay will discuss both views before reaching any conclusion
To begin with, transport system is back bone of the every nation, several messes using public transport to hit their destination. For example, in some regions majority of folks prefer to travel through public transportation because they do not have any alternative mode of the transportation. Thus it is important the transportation system works well and help to every passenger to reach their point on proper time,it requires money . Moreover if people reached their office on time and they earn more money as well as also improve quality of the work. To made life easier government should spend money on transportation system
On the other hand, turning to other argument government should utilize fund's on other aspects such as cost reduction of the transportation fare so every individual using this mode. For instance, if government should spend money on cost reduction it also solve so many problems like many people prefer public transport rather than their own vehicle and this step help to protect the environment. Undeniable, government spend money on cost reduction, it also help to many people
In conclusion, consume money on dropped their fare help to people who are traveling through public transportation system and it also save their environment. I personally believe that if cost reduction help to improve environment conditions directly or indirectly, then government spend money on cost reduction
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40357142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93710103337 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2761730565 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429143533251 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174022139053 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103929942782 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281461703779 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649834687275 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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