Dear Ravi,
How are you doing, I hope you and your family members are good.
Do you remember, when we were in college we use to cook in our flat and most of our dishes were awesome?. To extend our cooking skills, I am planning to enroll in college. I would like you to join me in the classes.
Classes will be held on weekends at Rahul cooking college near the railway station.
It would be great if you come to the classes, as I said our combination will bring more variety of dishes. Even you are also interested to cook and become a chef in a reputed restaurant. The college has some tie-ups with some hotels to give us a chance to prepare and showcase our food. This will be an interesting one to boost our career in cooking.
I would like to talk to you and discuss more on this, shall we meet this Sunday at 11 AM. I will be waiting for you at our Caffee.
Yours lovingly,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ou remember, when we were in college we use to cook in our flat and most of our dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26162790698 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24243063048 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7373215821 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.0833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357007010455 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133129750616 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526774691847 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191535014615 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254759994163 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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