Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently been made aware of a decision being considered by the local council to shut down sports and leisure centre. I am writing this letter to inform you about the difficulties which this decision might bring to society.
As we all know that this is the only centre of this kind in our area, where my friends and family come together to spend some time every weekend. In fact, spending time together at the centre after a hard week helps us to soothe our minds and get ready for the new challenges in the upcoming week.
Next, a centre like this has a great significance for the people, because of its different facilities such as the playground, swimming pool, and golf lawn, in an area like this where most of the houses don’t have any of these facilities.
Closing it down will have severe effects on people’s lives as they won’t have any other place to meet which will bring down the mutual harmony and face to face interaction. Also, many children visit the centre to learn swimming under my observation and I won’t be able to assist them in real-time if this decision is implemented.
I would request on behalf of the society to reconsider shutting it down as this centre is a crucial part of our community.
Yours sincerely,
Sumit Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...many children visit the centre to learn swimming under my observation and I won't b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7423580786 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55929472942 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3611607903 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777005866128 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407564930448 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522567854016 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356926979155 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571127122867 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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