The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is general belief that news reports nowadays targeted to fresh issues and urgent problems instead of the negative effects that brought to the humankind. these effects are caused by the positive trend of the global development which may comprise of the techonology revolution 4.0. In my point of view, I concur with such thought.
To begin with, it can be clearly seen that mainstream media channels regularly updates news about the society everyday including current matter happened around the world and emergencies. For instance, the BBC radio world service provided news regarding serval categories like political, economic, to name but two. Therefore, these pieces of information inform listeners latest data and keep them updated about the surrounding world. Despite such benefits, news concerns disadvantages accompanies positive developments is not frequently seen on the official channels.
Secondly, so as to attract the huge number of followers or readers, certain media channels tend to focus on private life of famous celebrities rather than the harmfulness to the society which pertains to the developments of the world. For example, some tabloids updated news concerning the marriage life of Justin Bieber and Hailey Balwin. As a result, less informations in relevant to the developments and its destructive effect to individuals is shown.
In conclusion, what can be concluded here is that the information about how dangerous the positive development draw to the mankind is not consider as a major news, and the reason behind that is because of the focusing in instant news and issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39682539683 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87246771935 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4531347753 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223724640786 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077612792147 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524840216038 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128923161702 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363649947105 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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