It is argued that media is focusing on complicated issues and accident while reporting news more than on good developments. Also they think that reporting problems are destructive to the humanity. I completely disagree with this point of view; however, I think that telling truth is more important to know than watching imaginary false news.
On the one hand, I think society must know what is going on in the world in order to make different decisions. Following global issues as wars or even some natural hazards people can avoid travelling to the hot spots and save their lives. For example if people did not know anything about the civil war in Kashmir they would be in danger by going there. They might be even killed because of positive news on TV which tells about the beautiful nature and quiet meditation in India. That’s why I think it is important to follow the news.
On the other hand watching news about problems in the world and emergencies might affect to human negatively because of psychological influence to the mind. All of us know about positive thinking and how does it affect to our body. For instance it is proved that some people become sick with dangerous illnesses as cancer because of the way of thinking. These people take everything to heart and in the result the consequences might be destroying.
To conclude, I think that there exist positive and negative impacts of watching news however it is vitally necessary to get reliable data from media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ng news more than on good developments. Also they think that reporting problems are ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, even so, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58015375262 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3033511826 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171167539087 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061381687929 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595407442768 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109561625832 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714119519103 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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