There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have
children.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
The phenomenon of deciding not to have an offspring after marriage is burgeoning at a staggering rate across the globe. This essay will suggest that this approach begets benefit in terms of augmenting their monetary status, and loneliness as the biggest drawback.
The primary advantage of opting a childless life is money-saving. This is to say that in this inflation era, there is an upsurge in living-cost; it is difficult for a family of two to make both end meets facilely. Moreover, the expenses of children are unaffordable for a married couple: babysitter, medical cost and school expenses. Therefore, this money can be saved to improve their own lifestyle so that they could live their lives with gratification. For example, an American citizen on average earns 10,000$ per year, while the average expense of a 5-year school-going child is estimated as 5000$ per year, this huge chunk of money gives rise to this phenomenon.
Despite the advantage above, the major drawback of not choosing a progeny is isolation. In other words, in older age when couples were not able to manage their lives on their own due to decreasing health and fitness levels, it could give rise to emotional distress and several mental illnesses. For example, psychologists revealed that in the lives of couples who do not have children face a lot of trouble because when one partner passed away, the others tend to feel alienation and might undergo many psychological challenges.
To conclude, many married couples have consensus on a childless life. While this essay argued that this decision is helpful in terms of saving a hefty amount which could be later spent on themselves; however, in their old age they face a plight due to lack of attention and care which an own child can offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...an American citizen on average earns 10,000$ per year, while the average expense of ...
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Line 5, column 598, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5000'.
Suggestion: $5000
...year school-going child is estimated as 5000$ per year, this huge chunk of money give...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01342281879 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74413969926 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1952395796 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206875611943 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708333708588 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328086350958 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114269627427 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00617544431876 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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