Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my displeasure with proposed local transportatipn schedule changes by local authorities. I would argue that it is a negative development.
First of all, one of the primary change is that there will not be any buses after 10 p.m at weekday: They, also, will not be available during public holidays.
Secondly, many shift workers will face economical phenomenons given the fact that they will have to own automobiles and commute by them. Further and more importantly, congestion in inner city will become a detrimental problem as city dwellers will need to use private cars to go shopping and visit museums at holidays.
Finally, I would contend that there should be at least a route each hour during weekdays so that cost of travelling will not be too affluent. I also would like officials to pay double wages at New Year day and Happy Mother day hense publich transport systems will be offered to citizens that vitally important times. I hope an article about it will be publicised promptly.
Thank you for consideration in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s matter. Yours faithfully, Mary Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00531914894 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7677725223 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723404255319 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1897677518 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194578856376 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687145377175 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360971101737 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103044491766 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292926960781 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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