some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. other think that they could just make as much noise as they want. discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether they should have freedom to make noise when they want or comply with regulation of it. In my point of view, people should have right to generate noise in what level they want.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the amount of noise produced should be controlled by the government. The first reason is that people how live in noisy place not only can not take a proper rest after a trying day, but also may have some health problems like headache and , in long term, they are more likely to have authority problems, such as hearing loss .if they constantly expose to loud noise. Secondly, too much noise do not allow people to concentrate on their work or study.
However, I believe that people should be allowed to generate noise as they want because of some reasons . Firstly, to begin with , nowadays, people suffer from considerable stress at work and school and tend to find a way to mitigate stressful situations . in some case, some people consider making noise like singing and holding party as recreational activities , which can bring amount of relaxations. People can be deter from gaining access to one of the useful way of relaxation if this be strictly controlled. Another reason for this opinion is that scientist have invented walls , windows . and doors that can block out noise , so people can focus on their work or study without being disturbed. Therefore one of the negative consequence of generating voice can be reduced my modern technology and there is no need to strict restriction on noise.
In conclusion, while so people believe that the level of noise produced should be put under rule , in my point of view , people can make noise as much as they want to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79401993355 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45451166975 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2579855328 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355196995696 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138455186015 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874296965695 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241789916128 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359142695939 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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