Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Immigration to developed countries is a growing trend nowadays. It is often argued that this is a positive development for the children, whilst others disagree and believe that it leads to adverse ramifications on the children growth. However, this essay agrees with the former viewpoint and discuss both opinions with examples.
Developed countries such as the United States, Canada and Australia offer more exposure to kids in terms of a higher standard of education, better lifestyle and cutting-edge technology than their home country. With this advanced experience, children develop comprehensive skills at the school level where the primary focus of education is on practical learning rather than theoretical knowledge. For instance, the presence of modern equipped academic buildings with highly educated teachers and 5G technology are prime examples in developed nations. Therefore, this essay agrees that settling down abroad benefits the children in all ways.
On the other hand, certain people think that children face language barriers and cultural differences in foreign countries. As a result, they feel isolated and develop conservative nature. Sometimes young children become the victim of depression too, which affects their mental and physical health. However, this essay believes that language differences are temporary and gradually the immigrant children learn foreign languages and become proficient at a very young age. In fact, multilingual children are socially more active and have a wide range of a social network. Also, being multilingual opens up wide new range of career opportunities in long-run where competency in more than one language is preferred by most employers. Hence, it is worth to consider the positive side than the negative one, which can be easily overcome with time.
To conclude, foreign immigration positively affects the overall cognition and growth of the children, some still feel that initial challenges faced by children may affect their mental well-being. However, the right attitude to combat these challenges and overall skills earned by living in an advanced environment is certainly advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68923076923 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83939488511 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7129298274 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217322654448 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686996776414 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671411614265 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126378088358 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039803793181 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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