Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary society, smoking is so common among youngsters and old people. Invincibly, smoking has detrimental effect on both individual and society. That is the reason, It is believed that smoking should be restricted in public places. I completely accede with this viewpoint and in this essay I will support my opinion conclusively.
On top of everything, smoking is injurious to health. It has many adverse effects on one's mental as well as physical health. For instance, smoking is one of the major reasons of cancer as mentioned by Dr. James in his article. Also, one survey conducted on smokers when compared with non-smokers reveals that the level of focus and concentration, productivity at workplace and physical stamina of former category is often less efficient than latter. Not only one's own health but the society in which one is smoking gets affected by inhaling toxic air.
Moreover, smoking adds an extra expense in one's expenditure list. it has been observed that by being in the company of smoker, their mates also start following their smoking habits. Approximately, a chain smoker is addicted to smoke 10-15 cigarettes per day, which costs 10 bucks per cigarette. That can be considered as a valuable amount and If saved, can be invested on some paramount need in future.
On the other hand, some people consider burning cigarettes as as a status or standard of living in this newfangled society and believe that government should not interfere in one's freedom to choose, whether to smoke or not. It should be one's own personal choice.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned provide plausible reasons to restrict smoking in public places. In my opinion, as early government will take an initiative to impose a ban on smoking publicly and spread awareness among people, more helpful it will be to promote one's own health as well as society's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08414239482 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8430784488 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.521589603 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26466599651 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934200535398 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655516887932 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149190338023 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031512321888 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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