In this contemporary era, a trouble-free life is unimaginable. Individuals of every age faces numerous problems in their daily life. According to some experts, people should focus on solving their future problems rather than wasting their time and energy on thinking about their past. I completely agree with the statement and have given my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, early planning makes a person more confident throughout the life. If someone will be prepared to face the problems which might come across him or her in the future, he or she will not find themselves in a dilemma and will be able to cope up with the situation in a confident manner. For example, the businessman always focuses on his future problems rather than that occurred in his past. That is why they are always confident in every aspect. Thus, focus made on future troubles can help a person in becoming more confident.
Secondly, over thinking about the mistakes and problems in the past can deteriorate people's health. It effects badly on the brain of an individual as it can cause many psychological disorders. For instance, a report from a survey conducted by World Health Organization proved that the masses who were concerned about their past, were found to have psychological diseases like trauma, depression,et cetera. Thus, thinking about past affect the human body to a greater extent. Moreover, thinking about past is merely a wastage of time as no one can change it.
To recapitulate, focusing on future goals and problems is more important than that of past because past always make people less confident and gift diseases to them.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a confident manner" with adverb for "confident"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04744525547 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80563898279 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4545560106 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276513001549 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842775003027 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785598562072 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159553344822 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039263032505 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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