write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Mr. Smith
I am writing this letter in order to express my disappointment regarding the services of The Stars hotel, Sydney, booked through your agency for my business meeting with a client.
To explain my inconvenience, I would like to tell you that when I reached the hotel, firstly the receptionist found no room booking on my name but when I showed them the e-generated booking slips, they offered me a non air-conditioning room instead of air-conditioning one. however, my client was all over his way to the hotel, I agreed to reside in the room they alloted me. when I entered the room, I found it to be impossible for anyone to stay as the temperature was very high over there. Then, I again requested the manager to shift my room after which he asked me to shift to that of on fifth floor. Unfortunately, the lift over there was out of work due to which I was supposed to climb the stairs. it was the worst living arrangement I cam across.
however, I would suggest you to be very careful for the next time whenever I ask you to book a residential place. Also, I would request you to make a compensation for my inconveniences if possible.
In an appreciation of your prompt reply.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Ankita Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...g room instead of air-conditioning one. however, my client was all over his way to the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ich I was supposed to climb the stairs. it was the worst living arrangement I cam ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...orst living arrangement I cam across. however, I would suggest you to be very careful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65022421525 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95052271076 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6411436501 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194423582428 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747419819543 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743472602949 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112709404367 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606639015948 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.