write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting. My company Pakistan telecommunication private limited sent me to turkey for settlement of a project. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed in the hotel from 22nd to 24th of October in Room number 406.
Firstly, The Room was quite spacious and after the session, I was so tired that wanted to sleep immediately. But when I switched on the air-conditioner it was not working properly. I had to open the window so that some fresh air can reduce the heat in the room. Secondly, The Refrigerator was also not working at ultimate temperature and all the drinks were hot. Finally, It looked like bed sheets were old and tattered with spots on them.
This was extremely frustrating, however I complained about the situation to the hotel manager, But to no avail. As the arrangement were below the expectations and my requirements and service was really pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my money and report about hotel condition to its owner so that other visitors do not face the same issues in the future.
I want you to send the settlement in my bank account.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72811059908 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81435177806 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8271394999 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2214360422 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674834707443 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070364608625 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140288289334 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717972624229 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.