"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
The assumption is basically filled with insufficient data , is not very much analyzed. It does not provide adequate information to reach a conclusion.
At first, the assumption introduces adams has higher number of agents than Fitch And also larger of number full time staff Than fitch. But it does not provide us the quality of service between the two realty company. Since Adam has the bigger number of staff and higher revenue, that doesn't mean that the service provided by the adam is better than Fitch. in further, Some larger company may face service deterioration because of huge number staff or service.
The author Emphasizing on adam by saying that he faced both the realty company and Service of adam realty company is quicker. Although the time range of taking service from both of them is differed by almost 10 years. people may have low economic condition to buy a home in earlier. Moreover, the time when author took service from fitch was the period of economic disaster. The assumption fails to indicate those criteria.
The assumption proposed that one should take service from adam for quick and good service. Although it is failed to indicate their operating area whether in urban or rural. Adam may operate in urban area where people are interested to buy home. Then It is not good for somebody to sell to adam who wants to sell a home in remote place.
The assumption is based on illogical reasoning and failed to provide predominant data to analyze. Moreover, It is based on faulty reasoning. In addition that, the author should focus on every possible consequences to make suck assumption.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1310 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.764 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.434 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.472 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... basically filled with insufficient data , is not very much analyzed. It does not ...
^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ts than Fitch And also larger of number full time staff Than fitch. But it does not provi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...umber of staff and higher revenue, that doesnt mean that the service provided by the a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...vided by the adam is better than Fitch. in further, Some larger company may face s...
^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vice of adam realty company is quicker. Although the time range of taking service from ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany is quicker. Although the time range of taking service from both of them is d...
^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...of them is differed by almost 10 years. people may have low economic condition to buy ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eover, the time when author took service from fitch was the period of economic di...
^^
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...er, It is based on faulty reasoning. In addition that, the author should focus on every ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 274.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91605839416 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52275593759 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 705.55239521 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5108304282 57.8364921388 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 23.324526521 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.70786347227 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210419654104 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593530040785 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730328332574 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959201641184 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772859063824 0.0628817314937 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.3799401198 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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