Dear Igor,
I am so elated to have received your letter. At first, I could not believe that you wrote to me, but I am happy that you approached me to seek advice. At the outset, I would suggest that you should not go to college. I can justify why I feel so.
I have known you for almost a decade and I know you do not want to engage yourself into the same thing as others. You have always decided to take a path that is less travelled. I have always been amazed by your life decisions and with the outcomes.
Moreover, I feel you should take up a job and as you are not one studious kind of person and you get bored with the monotony in your life. You seek a new challenge every day and with you going to college it would be the same routine for you every day.
Furthermore, I can assure you with the personality like you who needs a new challenge every day you would be well suited to take up a job somewhere in the customer service industry. You can easily make your name in the industry and I am sure you can handle those new challenges easily.
I hope that you consider my suggestion.
Yours truly,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hope that you consider my suggestion. Yours truly, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20183486239 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26107241085 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0272911597 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280530993472 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101179625792 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762340139607 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163477688118 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755188812793 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.