The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by tourist information office in six months in one city in 2011.
The line graph compares the figure of enquiries received by the tourist information office by telephone, letter/e mail and in person in one town from January to June in year 2011. Overall, it is noticeable that the number of enquiries received in person increased significantly whereas the figure of letter received declined throughout the period shown.
In January, the use of telephone is the most popular means receiving enquiries, this accounted for approximately 900. Next, enquiries received letter/email is just below 800. However, in person is the least means with above 400.
Between February and June, the figure of enquiries received through person rose gradually to overtook enquiries received letter/email and through telephone to peaked at approximately 1900. enquiries received through telephone remain stable at 100 between march and April before it jumped rapidly to hit highest point of 1600. In contrast to this, enquiries received through letter /email decreased steadily to 400in.may and remained unchange for the rest of the year.
- The chart below show reason why people go to work by bicycle and car. 73
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoidingchange.Others, however think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Enquiries
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Suggestion: hit the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, whereas, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56172839506 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79823060125 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.14010582 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257921851901 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116369731245 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925098172291 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178891389254 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930506519908 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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