you recently did a short course. the cooekery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.In your letter
DESCRIBE WHAT you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you have done since the course
suggest another cookery course you like the school to offer.
Dear sir or Madam,
I am jasmine kaur. I am writing in response to give my feedback on the vocational kitchen course I had completed last week in your prestigious "unique cuisine'' institution.
At first, the course was a learning experience for me. The most intriguing part of the course was the people of diverse tradition people under same roof working as a teamwork unitedly.Besides, opportunity to acquire the understanding of exquisite meals and cuisine from different people according to their individual preferences.As well knowledge of myriad of herbs, shrubs and unique styles of preparing dishes. I loved the making of indian deserts the most in the course.
Noticeably, i was not expertise in the cooking so I have invested my greatest time in learning the ways and techniques of cooking style with a little practice of cooking in every weekends.Whenever i tried to heat the pan and start to do something I just scattered everything all around. Luckily, in the last days of the course i have cooked a few times in a day.
Lastly, i would like to suggest you to add some western dishes such as italian, spanish and other dishes methods of cooking in the course to have awareness of international cuisine also.
|I hope you will considered about this in next session of the course.
yours faithfully,
jasmeen kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the people of diverse tradition people under same roof working as a teamwork un...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ame roof working as a teamwork unitedly.Besides, opportunity to acquire the understandi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...cording to their individual preferences.As well knowledge of myriad of herbs, shru...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s the most in the course. Noticeably, i was not expertise in the cooking so I h...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whenever
...e practice of cooking in every weekends.Whenever i tried to heat the pan and start to do...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cooked a few times in a day. Lastly, i would like to suggest you to add some w...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...have awareness of international cuisine also. |I hope you will considered about th...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...tional cuisine also. |I hope you will considered about this in next session of the cours...
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Suggestion: Yours
...t this in next session of the course. yours faithfully, jasmeen kaur ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he course. yours faithfully, jasmeen kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, lastly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04464285714 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05941053559 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.362982447 44.8134815571 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207267642064 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807230870203 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523622774717 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108546174447 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466952972863 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.