Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
describe the problem
say how long it has been a problem
explain what action you want the neighbour to take
Dear Mr Jackson,
I am writing to you to see what can be done about the large tree at the front of your house. The tree leans over my side of the fence which divides our properties. It is not just a nuisance but also a danger. It drops a large amount of debris on my roof and these leaves twigs block the downpipes. During the last heavy rainfall my house leaked as a result. My worst fear is that in a storm the tree might fall down, damaging my house and possibly injuring my family.
The tree has been a problem for over ten years and I have talked to you about it before but the tree has now reached such a height that I urge you take action immediately. I think you should have the tree remove. An alternative course of action would be to prune the tree to fence level, but I think it would die anyway if you did this.
I hope th problem can be solved soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jel Baker
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Comments
Dear Mr Jackson,
Dear Mr Jackson,
I am writing to you to see what can be done about the large tree at the front of your house. The tree leans over my side of the fence which divides our properties. It is not just a nuisance but also a danger. It drops a large amount of debris on my roof and these leaves twigs block the downpipes. During the last heavy rainfall my house leaked as a result. My worst fear is that in a storm the tree might fall down, damaging my house and possibly injuring my family.
The tree has been a problem for over ten years and I have talked to you about it before but the tree has now reached such a height that I urge you take action immediately. I think you should have the tree remove. An alternative course of action would be to prune the tree to fence level, but I think it would die anyway if you did this.
I hope th problem can be solved soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jel Baker
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17045454545 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09950677994 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6475077508 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7272727273 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115762061542 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420495061946 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527805834113 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538915970422 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433365542537 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.