environmental problems- managed by government or individuals.
Everyone talks about the problems of the environment as it has become a global issue and needs to be tackled. The government alone cannot manage the situation and I believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals as well. Hence, I partially disagree with the statement that it cannot be managed by individuals alone.
To commence with, small steps by each and every person can make a huge difference. For instance, the world’s population at present is 7 billion and if everyone plants and nurtures five trees in their lifespan, it would definitely make a remarkable difference. To add to it, many people have taken proactive measures to control the threats to the environment and they have been recognized by the government at national and international levels.
On the other hand, there are certain measures like car rationing, which can be well managed by the authorities if the pollution levels rise at any point in time. Hence, the government needs to take control of such measures and make it mandatory for the people to follow. Moreover, support of people is required and both the parties have to go hand in hand in curbing the difficult situations faced on the planet earth.
To conclude, everyone, be it a five-year child, must be taught the advantages of planting trees, saving water, limited or no use of plastic and so on. This can be achieved by individuals collaborating with the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'hand in'.
Suggestion: hand in
...equired and both the parties have to go hand in hand in curbing the difficult situations faced ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94142259414 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87098811981 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5370863327 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177082832838 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724647084929 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857406366109 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110251811829 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112448653652 0.0609392437508 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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