Dear Selin,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know that I will not be able to watch the latest action movie with you as it was planned due to car accident my mother involved. I am really sorry for it.
First of all, yesterday I got a phone call from a policemanwho reported accident and her mental health. I took a ticket from Australian Airlines to travel London immediately after I had learned that she had been sleeping unconsciously for five hours.
Secondly, I am aware of the fact that it is the first movie which you are in the lead role, and thus my participation is vitally important for you. If it suits you, I would like you to recommend you to watch it with my best friend Mary who is keen on watching action and sci-fi movies.
Finally, she had written novels related with space craft and robots consequently she will be happy to attend it. Further and more importantly, she is a world renowed writer at Cinema Magazine thus she will mention it in her column which will persuade more people watch it. Sorry again for this cancelation and I hope it will top the charts ,n the following months.
See you soon,
Best wishes,
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...due to car accident my mother involved. I am really sorry for it. First of all...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lation and I hope it will top the charts ,n the following months. See you soon,...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44416384473 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2545419567 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2252241809 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888041011091 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852202069147 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13067964074 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114662719433 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.