Sports not only bring the thrill in peoples’ life but also keep them physically fit. It is believed by some that the life threatening sports activities should be prohibited by the government, while others argue that it will restrict the freedom of choice. This essay will discuss both sides of the views.
It is argued by some that the dangerous sports, such as paragliding and sky diving, should be banned by the government. This is because, in the case of accidents, these sports can lead to permanent disability or even death. Those who favor this opinion think that people, especially youngsters, are naive and they do not understand what is best for them, and therefore, it is the responsibility of the government to ensure their safety by putting a restriction on high-risk sports.
Conversely, others reckon that people should have the liberty to choose the kind of sports they want to play. Many studies have shown that playing high-risk sports decreases stress-hormone and boost confidence levels. In fact, there is a certain amount of risk in every kind of game. This can be illustrated with the recent event wherein a cricket umpire was hit by a ball and lost his life after suffering a brain stroke. In brief, none of the games are entirely safe; therefore, it will be unfair to ban specific sports.
To conclude, although some sports are considered more unsafe as compared to others, outlawing them will impact peoples’ fundamental right to freedom of choice. This essay discussed why on the one hand some sports should be prohibited, and why on the other hand this might not be an appropriate solution.
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities while others think that people have the freedom do whatever sports they choose. 61
- Formal examination are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. What is your opinion ? 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ngerous sports, such as paragliding and sky diving, should be banned by the government. Th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... might not be an appropriate solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, therefore, while, in brief, in fact, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76483400987 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1776115992 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346022210241 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108745675387 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961866663046 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199704905788 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415841867235 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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