Education has become a vitally important issue to be a developed country in recent times. Majority of people would argue that curriculum which includes Maths, Physics and Chemistry should persuade students service community without get wages. This essay strongly agrees with this sentiment due to these reasons.
First of all, working for community will bring countless positive elements into their lives. To begin with, they will develop high sense of individualism, self-esteem and self-reflection which are vital to land jobs with high financial rewards. For example, a survey by Job Portal in 2018 revealed that 80% of employers prefer hiring workers who attended charity work in earlier times. Further and more importantly, it will make them develop many skills such as team work, punctuality and sense of leadership which will make them successful in professional lives. Consequently, if it is made compulsory in high schools, it will be very beneficial for them in the near future.
Secondly, when free community service is provided to eldery and less affluent individuals, it can lead to innumerable benefits to societies. One of the primary benefit will be that local authorities can provide numerous sport activities which will make them stay healthier and fit to children's of poor families. Despite many parents will not be able to afford sport classes, they will attend them at public buildings which will not need more incme taxes since existing structures will be used and there will be no payment to instructors. People will also live in a better society. If the number of charity works rises in a society, an increasing amount of money will be gathered to assist homeless and less affluent people living in healthy conditions. For instance, a study by World Life Magazine in 2017 reported that the lowest number of homeless people is in AUS where unpaid service is a norm. Therefore, if they are involved in such projects while studying, they will create a better country to live in later times.
By way of conclusion, I completely agree that governments should introduce laws to make unpaid social work compulsory at curriculum which will have many positive effects on both individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to sport'
Suggestion: to sport
...many parents will not be able to afford sport classes, they will attend them at publi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18055555556 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73617597216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9916465316 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164286439602 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608971084136 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381909660891 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998036781764 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021807860584 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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