A large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make inquiries about the financial aspect.
Dear Mr. Brown,
I writing to express my concern about huge tree in front of my home. The problem is, I am not able to park my park though I have to park it away from my house on the roadside.
I believe there is not other option available to cut it done. However, it is tough job because it can fall on the roof of my house or also can damage the road on other side. So it has to be done very carefully and I am sure we need machines are required to do this task, it is not possible for humans.
I am also curious to know about expenses required to repair the floor, will council help me with that or I have to spend it from my pocket. Kindly take a notice of this and please help me as soon as possible.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Evans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Mr. Brown, I writing to express my concern about hug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16666666667 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08768775705 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9654493337 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2222222222 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818194374679 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341678514432 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025015883545 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438591822823 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125717711123 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.