Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has Technology affected the type of relationship people make?Is this a positive or negative development?
In the contemporary era, the way of interaction with each other has been changed going to boom in technology. this phenomenon affects the way of relationship made by people. However, the communication is now easy as compared to past but there are significant cons on our relationship building. this essay will put light on both positive and negative impact before making final note.
To begin with how this advancement made our relationship building great it has made the communication easier compared to our older methods of interacting with people.Nowadays different applications on smartphones are available by which we can transmit our expression for we can communicate with our family or friends.A recent study by Yale University found that 95% of people across the world use WhatsApp for their daily communication.Additionally, social networking site help us to explore the world digitally by making new friends from different countries throughout the world which can help the people to know more and more about diverse culture and tradition of that nation.
On the other hand, this development brought a major demerits on human life.Because of this we trimmed down face to face communication where we can share our feelings and emotions.
In conclusion, changed technology will be useful if it will be used in control pattern otherwise it can badly affect our fragile way of making relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37053571429 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34610647939 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.272247369 43.030603864 463% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.857142857 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308697752958 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150093677689 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817391382293 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177084471034 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949592506915 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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