Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain In the letter Describe the problem and why you are unhappy Arrange for an engineer to visit your home Request a reduction in your bill

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Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent.

Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain.

In the letter.

Describe the problem and why you are unhappy.

Arrange for an engineer to visit your home.

Request a reduction in your bill.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my disappointment with your internet service at my residence.

I am working from home and my residential address is 26 Murlidhar Residency, Citylight, Surat 395002. I have purchased an unlimited internet plan which will offer 50 Mbps speed. Since most of the time the internet speed is less than 1 Mbps, I am not able to download and access important documents from my email. Hence, the irregular and slow internet service it is causing too much disturbance to my work.

I request you to send the concerned engineer at my home latest by day after tomorrow. I have an online meeting with an international client after 2 days, so, I would like the problem to be resolved at the earliest. I am available at home from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m.

Having given the plan and not receiving the desired internet speed and continuous connectivity from your company, I would like to get a 15% discount on my next month's bill. I have used your plan from last 6 months and have not faced any such difficulty in the past.

Hope my complain will be resolved at the earliest.

I can be reached at 456(35645) and abc@gmail.com

Yours faithfully

John Patel.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Residency' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'residencies'.
Suggestion: Residencies
... my residential address is 26 Murlidhar Residency, Citylight, Surat 395002. I have purcha...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...har Residency, Citylight, Surat 395002. I have purchased an unlimited internet pl...
^
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... too much disturbance to my work. I request you to send the concerned engine...
^^
Line 11, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...problem to be resolved at the earliest. I am available at home from 10 a.m. to 5 ...
^
Line 11, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vailable at home from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Having given the plan and not receiving ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79326923077 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79960885238 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5891790348 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213433906806 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832210970895 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466020254977 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945692327441 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676181812035 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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