The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by wardiati on Thu, 09/05/2019 - 03:03

The line chart illustrates the proportion of senior citizen in three different countries in a century. Overall, there was a significant rose in the number of elderly in all countries. Although japan stood as the lowest number of population age 65, at the end of the period it will account as the highest figure.

In the first year, japan saw as the lowest number of senior citizen among the countries. It began by just about 5%. In the ten following years, it experienced small decreased (around 2%) and, remained unchanged for more than twenty-year (from 1960 to 1985). Following which, the figure saw a small increase to that of starting number. It is predicted that the number of elderly in japan will rise to more than 7% in 2020 and, then shall increase exponentially into more than a fourth in 2040.

The elderly figure of The United observed as the biggest number among the three in 1940. The number increased by more than 5% in four decades and, then is slightly falling from 1980 to 2020. Following which, the number is projecting a significant increase approximately 23% in the last reported year. Furthermore, Sweden’s population aged 65 and over stood just above 5% and, the figure witnessed a moderate increase to a little below 15% in 1980. After which, the figure experienced fluctuation and, will finish the year with 25%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70613669341 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9852038811 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1538461538 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107792144452 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408945009826 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443254629894 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085808236213 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04822354897 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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