Integrated Writing
In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent) of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company benefits.
For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rate. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate.
Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests or enjoying leisure activities.
according to the article a type of evergreen tree named torreya taxifoha located mainly in the state of florida is begined to become extinct since 1950s. Hence, the author provides three main idea to prevent declining this specioes. On the contrary, the professor is firmly of the belief that the methods are not satisfactory and cannot stop the problem correctly. therefore, she repudiates all of them.
Initially, the reading states that owing to having appropriate microclimate, reestablishing torreya in northern part of florida can bring back life cycle for this species. However, the lecturer rejects this method by explaining that because of global warming in the surrounding extent area, the climate of the location changed dramatically recently; as a result planting tree there will not be a successful experience.
In addition, the article asserts that planting seeds and saplings of torreya in different locations which were suitable area for this species in the past, can help to protect them from becoming extinct. Nevertheless, the professor contends this approach by reasoning that according the assertions planting this kind of tree in different location causes severe conditions for other local plant and trees. Consequently, other species decline dramatically or become extinct after a while.
Finally, the author avers that protecting torreya in labratoaries can guarantee their presence for a long time. On the other hand, the lecture refutes this nypothesis by arguing that the population of trees planted in labratoaries could not be enormous. therefor, their resticted diversity and numbers causes extinction in front of deseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
according to the article a type of evergreen tree...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he state of florida is begined to become extinct since 1950s. Hence, the author p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... and cannot stop the problem correctly. therefore, she repudiates all of them. Initiall...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefor
... in labratoaries could not be enormous. therefor, their resticted diversity and numbers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55905511811 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228132327 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5695218428 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0243296566552 0.272083759551 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00833410642425 0.0996497079465 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106285571951 0.0662205650399 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0156820725734 0.162205337803 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122542836928 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.42419426049 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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