In some countries children under 16 are not allowed to leave schools by law and to get full time work. Is this a positive or negative development?
Children under the age of 16 are forbidden to leave school judiciary and are restricted to do full-time jobs in many parts of the world. In my opinion, this is a positive efforts made by the authorities, as it enables young people to get secondary education and lower the rate of child exploitation.
To start, education at least at secondary level is the fundamental right of every child. By enforcing such laws governments improve literacy rate which is vital for overall development of a society. In other words, basic education helps children in different aspects of life. Subjects like history, for instance teaches country's old culture, heritage, international relation which are wealth of a nation. Likewise, mathematics helps in developing reasoning and mental ability also science gives them better understanding about nature, technology, latest inventions globally. No wonder, combination of all this subjects transform children into responsible citizen in the future.
Another point to consider is, in many third world nations for instance, India, Pakistan, Afghanistan, Nepal and many other African countries child labour is the eviled exist in the society. This is because children below 16 are vulnerable as they are immature to understand what is right and wrong. Needless to say, lack of education makes the situation even worse, therefore, by making education mandatory till the age of 16, government trying to drastically diminish the problem of child labour and putting immense efforts in the development of cultural community.
To conclude, i strongly assert that compulsory education up to the age of 16 is a welcoming step to curb social evils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, second, so, therefore, third, at least, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41825095057 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92743566459 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638783269962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5492059505 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220328445962 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706757104819 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686186081634 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125787397027 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897877593444 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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