Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own idea (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extant do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
An artist must be given relaxation from government to demonstrate their new ideas and thinking according to their desire whether it is visualization, music or speech. My inclination support with the stated statement which can be further elaborated by following arguments;
It is often said that an artist is a most precious asset of the country wherein they demonstrate their arts and represent the country at international level either it belongs with any industry such as, film, music, drama, sketching, painting or many others. Moreover, it has commonly seen that there are number of art exhibitions are held at international level on everywhere in different countries in which numerous artist visits from several countries to express their art in front of international people. One of the obvious advantages of art's exhibition is to make money thorough various events that actually could be very helpful for the economy as well.
Moreover, in order to outweigh the any type of art gallery government should form the criteria where artist can show their talent, as well as, government need to provide platform as well for new artist who want to pursue their career in art gallery. Survey depicts that art is a unique fun which cannot be done by everyone henceforth this is the responsibility of government to give fully permission to the artist to demonstrate their ability. Along with this, awareness of art and education must be provided by the government because, it has found that in third world countries people are keen to pursue their life but inadequacy of institute and support they are unable to do that.
All in all, it is the responsibility of government to provide equal opportunities in every field whether it is concern with engineering or art. Although, it has number of advantages as stated above which will be worthwhile for the country.
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| 2019-09-06 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich will be worthwhile for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, moreover, third, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11400651466 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88394497926 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0040609701 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.444444444 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212248697896 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917986639068 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510497137973 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129341726412 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548874084224 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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