Is the internet bad for young people?
In today's fast-paced, the internet has become more beneficial and impressive tool to spend time with many opportunities. There is no doubt many youngsters are spending their time with different Phone, tablet, computer and laptops but there are so many pros and cons of using internet.
If I outline the advantages of using internet is that people who are studying in universities, schools and colleges they may easily do their assignments, increasing grades by the help of using internet. However, some people lives far from the home they may also keep in touch with their friends and family and do so many things like audio and video call, messaging, sharing pictures etc. Furthermore, one of the big advantage is many people are dong online jobs especially women who cannot travel and go outside on account of personal issues.
In contrast, the most noticeable thing was found that the majority of youngsters have become addicted of online playing games, spending more and more time with internet and neglecting the parents call for no serious reason. Even though, they do not feel like to eat foods at their time. The most likely reason of spending more and more time on internet is that parents do not stop their child at early stage.
To sum up, spending so many times on internet can have a negative impact. Personally, I think internet is the incredible and best tool to learn and connect to with others. However, we should take care of health and time not to use excessively.
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| 2019-05-07 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... outside on account of personal issues. In contrast, the most noticeable thing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, i think, in contrast, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8937007874 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55006598065 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9944640801 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155015374435 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619646585158 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417432431398 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932493664862 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254938251076 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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