Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, shopping in the Internet is more and more popular on over the world. This essay is aimed at weighing the merit and demerit of this issue prior to arriving at a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there come a couple of drawbacks that are worth mentioning. Firstly, the likelihood is that people can be tricked in the Internet. On the grounds that, buyer can not have a face-to-face exchange and check goods, they will receive the unqualified goods such as unsatisfactory products, counterfeit goods, and so forth. Secondly, that security risks are much more serious deserves consideration. As a matter of facts, in order to shopping in the Internet, people have to take the personal information to websites and allow access to permissions, and consequently their important information can be revealed and that lead to the extremely pernicious consequences.
On the other hand, there are a few different benefits that this issue brings. First, given that people just use digital equipment which is compatible with internet like smart phone, desktop, laptop and so on in order to choose and purchase products, they will save more time than go to buy directly at the store. Second, it is the suitable prices that is the competition of stores about price, qualification, the assessment of customers for their products and this helps people choose the more convenient goods. What is more, it is widely acknowledged that with the aid of the internet, people can purchase products in global.
In view of the aforementioned discussion, I take the position that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as, as a matter of fact, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93133854036 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5749368924 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207754899396 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775314913709 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815179067183 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122072445258 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730726152272 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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