The graph presents information about the percentage of people employed in the United Kingdom, Italy and the G7 average.
The bar graph shows the proportion of employed individuals divided into three age groups in the United Kingdom, Italy and the G7 average. Overall, it is obvious that most people employed from three different age brackets are British while Italians are the minority.
The Britain and G7 average figures are roughly similar. The percentage of 18-25 years old employees from United Kingdom is just above 50% compared with G7 average at around 43%. Interestingly, they both reached their highest percentage in 25-54 years old employees, just about 82% and nearly 80% respectively. In 55-64 years old, employees from United Kingdom and G7 average are almost identical at approximately 62%.
In contrast, there is a remarkable gap in the percentage of Italian workers in all age groups. Italy employed an insignificant proportion in youngest age group at around 15% while just above 50% in the oldest group. In 25-54 years of age, there is a large proportion of Italians at nearly 70%, though the lowest among employees of the same age bracket.
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| 2019-09-06 | Jessica Nadal | 73 | view |
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opin 78
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 68
- Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 73
- The graph presents information about the percentage of people employed in the United Kingdom, Italy and the G7 average. 73
- Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the youngest'.
Suggestion: in the youngest
...ly employed an insignificant proportion in youngest age group at around 15% while just abov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13450292398 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71695176382 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6881788077 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258236835855 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107764935628 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927126067105 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175271504545 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942014045996 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.